Lois & Clark Forums Forums Fan Fiction Lois & Clark Fanfic FDK Merry Christmas! Untitled 6/almost over? by Kent28

Ei Corumba! As Bart Simpson would say. Nice job finally getting it all out in the open. I thought Clark was going to blow it there for a minute with his "She only wants me for my tights" thing. I am glad she said what she said. But wow now we have to wait until after the new year! Oy! Ok Well have a happy new year and thern get back to this as soon as you can. Laura

YES! And Merry Christmas to you, too! I thought they'd never get here!

Susan

AAARRRGGHHHH!!!!! What can we do with that... that... lunkhead, Marcy? He's been wandering around all over these boards, in and out of everybody's stories, feeling sorry for himself because he hasn't told Lois his secret!!!!

Maybe there is nothing for it but doing just what you have Lois doing in this part of your story. Tell that lunkhead that you already know!!! And then make him say out loud what it is that you know already. And then kiss him? Okay, but you should make him stew for awhile, Lois. Don't you ever let him make you feel guilty for him lying to you!!!

Ann

P.S. I love that avatar you've got for yourself, that mugshot of Lois. Seeing that I've never gotten around to getting an avatar for myself, if you should find yours missing one day, I guess there is a likely suspect lurking around these boards!!!

P.P.S. Marcy, I've got to tell you, I just got the following text message: Luv him even if hes lunkhed. Lois. Well, there goes our chance of straightening him out, I guess. What can we do if Lois isn't cooperating?

I just love this segment. I think that that has to be the most beautiful revelation I've read in a long time. WAFFy, romantic, full of sparkling dialogue and perfect characterisation - and all of it just flowing so naturally and logically.

Just wonderful, Marcy.

And how delightful to see them both being so playful with one another, now that they've got all that misunderstanding out of the way. They are so cute.

I also found Clark's insecurities very poignant and moving. <snuffle>

Beautifully done, from start to finish.

LabRat

I feel exactly the same way about Clark Kent sometimes. Anyways, I may have finished the story, so there is a slim chance I could post late tonight. But don't hold your breath. If it's not there tomorrow, then I just couldn't get to it. I still have to pack tonight, so we'll see what happens.

I have to say, I have definitely been doing the feedback dance lately, and I really enjoyed this process, as well as reading your comments. Part of me still can't believe I actually got the nerve up to post anything.

Thanks,
Marcy