I'm creating my own feedback thread mostly so I can thank you all for your wonderful comments. This installment is a *little* longer then the others (three pages) but still pretty short. My brain can't function in longer chapters then this...I need stuff I can whip out in under two hours, because that's all I have on the computer at a shot. And when I back off from a fic for a while I tend to change direction abruptly. While it's not really noticable between chapters...changing direction *In* a chapter is a bad idea.
This started as a thank-you and turned into a paragraph-long explanation. I'm sorry.
Oh yes, special thanks to labrat...who is making the TOC. the truth is, I'm not exactly the best with computer stuff beyond really BASIC basics. Best I can do if I tried to make my own TOC was to write the title and copy-and-paste the link under it. Labrat not only is awesome and TOC's fics for everybody, but also makes mine look a whole lot neater then it otherwise would. So whole lot of special thanks there.
Anyway...back on topic...what did you guys think?
