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FDK:East of the Garden-Part 19,20 #26330 12/05/05 04:22 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. OP Pulitzer
OP mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great story! MAF Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK:East of the Garden-Part 19,20 #26331 12/05/05 05:04 PM
Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 120 shells Hack from Nowheresville
shells Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 120	Snave - This was so sweet! Such a nice ending to a wonderful story! I loved that you included so many funny lines - they were certainly welcomed after all of the angst that you put us through! Quote The first person was again immediately leaning over her. "Honey, tell me your name. Please..." "Um...it's Wanda. Wanda Detroit. I sing for drinks down at..." "No!" A devastated look covered his face. Then she suddenly grinned. "C'mon, Clark, lighten up! I'd know you anywhere. Lane 'n Kent? The hottest team in town?" And she slowly winked at him. It sunk in; she was playing him. "Lo-is! That was not funny!" This was priceless - i lol'd at that one! And this one too! Quote Whoa, whoa!" She reached up and hauled them both down into a ferocious hug. "What was that all about?" She turned her head and stared at Gracie. "And when did you learn to fly?" "I didn't. Emma flies us both. But I can make fires with my eyes. Wanna see?" Lois took a breath. "Not here; you'll burn the whole place down! You can show me when we get home...in the bathtub!" but this - pure waffs Quote And thus was born the world's newest superhero. And she dedicated her career not so much to Truth and Justice, as to Mercy -- to the saving of lives. And her name, of course, was Nightingale. Such a wonderful story - thank you so much for writing! Oh - but Maria has a nice point. What about the weekend? Well done, Snave! Shells You must be the change you wish to see in the world. - Mahatma Gandhi

Re: FDK:East of the Garden-Part 19,20 #26332 12/12/05 11:32 AM
Joined: Sep 2005 Posts: 76 Holladay, Utah S Snave Freelance Reporter
Snave Freelance Reporter S Joined: Sep 2005 Posts: 76 Holladay, Utah	Hi!! You guys have all been wonderful, in your support and helpful comments. Thanks to luvin_my_lnc, Jenni Debb, shells, Terry Leatherwood and Julia (and whoever I may have missed) for being there. But, again, special thanks go to About the un-written remainder of the weekend: Quote Hey! I want to read a little about the weekend. Quote Oh - but Maria has a nice point. What about the weekend? The only answer I have is -- Quote "Even Superman needs some downtime occasionally..." And they lived happily ever after -- off-camera! Regarding Terry Leatherwood's very apropos comment about Supes taking his soul-mate's death way too calmly: All I can say is, I agree. But the only way I could figure to play it was to have him 'suck it up' and keep it all inside for the time being. But a careful reading will show that even his super-control is being pushed to the limit: Quote "How can you see when it's so dark?" Walter asked. There was no response. "Clark..." Superman sighed, and responded, "Um -- sorry, Walter. What?" Anyway, this exercise has turned out to be a whole 'nother level of intensity from 'Cherub', the prequel to this piece. I learned a lot (including that you readers are more forgiving than I expected regarding some material which I thought might be too intense and taut for PG-13). So this, too, is going straight to the Archive. Thanks, everyone!! --Snave

Re: FDK:East of the Garden-Part 19,20 #26333 12/12/05 12:57 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. OP Pulitzer
OP mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Snave Quote But, again, special thanks go to mariadferdez for being right there for every posting. Sheesh, Maria, don't you have anything better to do than reading my stuff? MAF Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK:East of the Garden-Part 19,20 #26334 12/14/05 12:36 AM
Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 151 London, England SNL Hack from Nowheresville
SNL Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 151 London, England	Dear Snave,

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