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FDK: Cloud Nine-Part 2 #25177 11/04/05 10:32 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. OP Pulitzer
OP mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great piece. Quote Ignoring his attempts to explain that he had been blindsided by Cat’s actions, Lois stalked out of the room. He suspected she would be rather distant with him for the rest of the morning. With a sigh, he returned to his desk and sat down. Embarrassment, he had just discovered, no matter how intense, was another emotion that did not cause him to float. Daydreaming! :rolleyes: More ASAP, please. MAF Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK: Cloud Nine-Part 2 #25178 11/04/05 12:55 PM
Joined: Nov 2004 Posts: 457 QLD, Australia D Dave Beat Reporter
Dave Beat Reporter D Joined: Nov 2004 Posts: 457 QLD, Australia	Firstly... A longer part! Woohoo! And now... Loved it! <g> I'm in a bit of a rush this morning - have to study an entire course for Monday, so I'll be brief, but... yep. Loved it. I really like the twist on the Superman = hope dialogue. Very nice touch! And... because I can't not quote it: Quote He’d woken up this morning in a sea of tiny feathers - floating above them, actually, but covered in them too. He must have squeezed or pounded his pillow in his sleep, and it had apparently burst in a shower of feathers. That's fantastic imagery. Dave P.S - Every few days sounds good to me. 'I just kind of died for you; You just kind of stared at me' - Aurora, Foo Fighters

Re: FDK: Cloud Nine-Part 2 #25179 11/04/05 02:18 PM
Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 1,763 Canada SuperRoo Merriwether
SuperRoo Merriwether Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 1,763 Canada	I am really enjoying how you are focusing on his floating. It is very sweet! Sigh. I can understand how the first touches and such could can one to float. Sometimes it feels like you are. Poor Clark! I like how you said near something about the end how Clark knows an emotion that doesn't make him float. Cheers, Roo I've converted to lurk-ism... hopefully only temporary.

Re: FDK: Cloud Nine-Part 2 #25180 11/04/05 02:55 PM
Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California groobie Kerth
groobie Kerth Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California	This is a fun story with a great premise! Susan You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie.

Re: FDK: Cloud Nine-Part 2 #25181 11/04/05 04:29 PM
Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 120 shells Hack from Nowheresville
shells Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 120	Hi - just wanted to let you know that I think this is a really cute idea, and so far a very nicely executed story! As a math teacher - I've got to say this might be my favorite! Quote It defied the laws of geometry. He was in a love triangle with only two people. Three angles, but only two sides. But I also loved this bit as well Quote The first few days after the Trask incident were fairly quiet, at least from a Lois-equals-floating point of view. The "Lois-equals-floating" comment is very cute! Great job & keep those parts coming! Shells You must be the change you wish to see in the world. - Mahatma Gandhi

Re: FDK: Cloud Nine-Part 2 #25182 11/05/05 08:27 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia T TriciaW Pulitzer
TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Janet I've just read the first two parts. What a wonderful idea! Tricia

Re: FDK: Cloud Nine-Part 2 #25183 11/06/05 07:31 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Hey this was a good length of story. Thank you! Also it was a nice explaination of Clark's feelings at the start of things. You left of in a cute way with Clark being blindsided by Cat. More soon. Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

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