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, though it should come as no surprise. THe more I read, the more I enjoy and amaze myself. I too liked the group work in order to bring Lex down for good. As that part of the plot seems to positively evolve, you keep bringing new elements and my curiosity just can't hellp its nature. You have me wondering what it Cindy is up to. I also want to see Dan with the 'bimbo'. Superficial+superficial; has to be a perfect match!
But to me, the best thing about this part was than despite all of their doubts and insecurities, you left me feeling that Lois and Clark can work things out. I know you've hinted it before (nad I surely had believed it)but in this section you can feel that Lois is just trying tio be angry, and not quite succeding. She knows Clark couldn't be with someone like Veronica and she knows he loves her and is about to crawl-or rather fly- back to her. Well, she might not know about the crawling part, but what gets through is that she knows it isn't over, or at least feels it, even if she, oh surprise, won't admit it.
I'm not sure I've said it before, but all the supporting characters are great too; they don't only help the story move forward, they are aprt of the story.
Hope I didn't repeat myself, at least not much.
Cris (dying to read the rest of this story yet a little sad to see the end approaching... I said it, it's pure, unhealthy addiction!)
I think I remember reading something about this being part of a trilogy - you won't really abandon this Lois and Clark forever, will you? (all I need is a little hope!)
Lets hope Jaxon find out first. 
