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Hi,

Great part.

Dear Poussin,

Regards,

SNL.

Hey Poussin

Congratulations on your first fic! This is a really funny idea, and I like the original way you've chosen to tell it, with Lois telling the story of her idiocy to her son. I can just imagine her mind shooting off in all the wrong directions - LOL!

Yeah, as you say, you've got some grammar and tense problems here - but, heck, you should hear my French! There is no way on earth I could write a story in French. You'll get better. I was delighted to see Archbish offering to help you - FoLCs are fantastic.

So, looking forward to part 3...


Wendy

What a cute story. I like that it's from Lois perspective. Part 3 soon please.

Jackie

This is a really interesting point of view. And just for the record I speak NO French...ZERO...so I have no criticism!

Looking forward to how Lois ends here.

I LOVE this story!!! The conclusions Lois leaps to are totally believable and have me laughing the whole time I'm reading. Keep it coming! Susan

Poussin

A great part!

I can see how Lois jumped to wrong conclusion about Clark and Superman.

Tricia

Darnit! Susan stole what I was going to say! I *love* seeing season one through a new perspective. And Susan's right, every conclusion she jumps to is entirely believable! I especially love Lois's reasoning for the pheromone situation... even though I felt bad for her. :p

The only part of the story I didn't like:



More soon!!

Sara

Thank You very much to you all. I was afraid that part 2 was the less interesting part of the 3. That's the part that was the most diffcult for me to write.

I wanted to made Lois's conclusions believable, and I was afraid I failed.

Personaly, that's the part 3 I prefered. I hope that will be the same for you. I post it right now.

I'm delighted you like my story so far. I wasn't very sure that to write a story in the first person was a good idea.