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#245527 01/01/07 12:36 PM
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I proudly present my first video of the new year. Any and all feedback would be greatly appreciated.

Skin
Music: Alexz Johnson


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Clark: "Lois? She's bossy. She's stuck up, she's rude... I can't stand her."
Lana: "The best ones always start that way."

"And you already know. Yeah, you already know how this will end." - DeVotchKa
#245528 01/01/07 01:07 PM
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You know, C_A, I should be pretty angry with you.
It's 1 am here and in about 5 hours my alarm's gonna wake me up, so I should be sound asleep

But no, you woldn't give me a chance to get some sleep as long as there's a video from you here waiting for me to be watched.

At least, you didn't disappoint me laugh
Seriously, this vid is really great, I'm stunned.
I didn't know the song nor the singer but the lyrics are sooo wonderful yet very sad.

"overreaction" - yeah, for sure wink

"I don't believe, I'll be alright" - aww... poor Lois frown

"I look into your eyes, I don't see mine..." - wow, a great line and I love the matching WWW scene

"another little wild lie" - oh yeah, *this* fits perfectly to LnC

"my permission to sin" - wow, matches absolutely great!

You can really hear and see (thanks to you) her desperation - trying to escape from this guy who appears not to be worth all the trouble he's causing inside her.

Yeah, this vid was absolutely gorgeous - a great start into the new year!

Jana


"Maybe I know what it's like, trying to find fulfillment in the wrong person. Trying to fit into the mold others expect of you."

"Looking for love" by DC Lady
#245529 01/03/07 12:43 AM
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Hey, Jana, thanks for the feedback. Sorry for keeping you up wink .

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You can really hear and see (thanks to you) her desperation - trying to escape from this guy who appears not to be worth all the trouble he's causing inside her.
I thought the lyrics perfectly fit what Lois must have been thinking at the time. Her anger and frustration over Clark's "little white lies" and continual disappearing act, her desire to get even with him by dating Dan, but also her inability to let go of him because he was "under [her] skin."

Thanks again for your comments. I love it when people point out their favorite bits of the video, because that lets me know which parts worked especially well.


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Clark: "Lois? She's bossy. She's stuck up, she's rude... I can't stand her."
Lana: "The best ones always start that way."

"And you already know. Yeah, you already know how this will end." - DeVotchKa
#245530 01/05/07 03:53 PM
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Loved it CA. I really liked the part where she ducked under the telephone cord.


~~Even heroes have the right to dream.~~
#245531 01/08/07 09:31 AM
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Thanks, Classicalla. Glad you liked it. smile


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Clark: "Lois? She's bossy. She's stuck up, she's rude... I can't stand her."
Lana: "The best ones always start that way."

"And you already know. Yeah, you already know how this will end." - DeVotchKa
#245532 04/08/07 08:32 AM
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This is such a beautiful video.


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#245533 04/15/07 04:05 AM
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Aw, thank you smile . I'm very happy you enjoyed it.


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Clark: "Lois? She's bossy. She's stuck up, she's rude... I can't stand her."
Lana: "The best ones always start that way."

"And you already know. Yeah, you already know how this will end." - DeVotchKa

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