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#24438 10/03/05 11:32 AM
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Hi,

Wow! Great part. goofy


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David was entranced by their ability to communicate by touch and facial expression.

Suddenly, Clark bent over, seizing his mid-section. He grimaced in pain. Lois nodded, put her arm around her husband and helped him out of the room. The whole charade took less than thirty seconds.

David was about to follow the couple, to see if he could help, when he heard a thud. He turned toward the noise: Anna lay on the ground, a vase overturned beside her. She clutched her stomach and groaned. David rushed over to her. He laid her flat on the floor.
eek OMG! Kryptonite!


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She grasped David’s hand, leaned closer to him and whispered, "Please, David...no hospital." She closed her eyes and took a shallow breath, once again wincing at the pain. "No hospital. Aspirin. Fluids."

"Has this happened before?"

"No. I’ll be fine. Just get me outta here. Please?" she pleaded.
confused Did Lois and Clark notice? goofy Lois should offer their house so Anna can rest and send David for aspirin.

More ASAP, please.

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Unfortunately, Lois and Clark had left the room by then... frown

This is really getting exciting, Gerry! Hurry back and post more!


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I like where this is going!!

Gerry, you are covering all the angles quite nicely.

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Ah!!! Frustration. This is the reason that some people don't like to read fic from the boards...when you get left hanging like this!!

ARGHGH

I am waiting FOR THE TALK. Pretty please soon?? wave


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Gerry

This is extremely well-written. smile1

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Thanks for your comments. I'm glad you're enjoying this story.

Part Eight coming up.

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Originally posted by gerry:
Thanks for your comments. I'm glad you're enjoying this story.

Part Eight coming up.

gerry
I think 'enjoying' is too soft a term. 'Terminally addicted to', now that is more like it!

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Also read Nan's Terran Underground!

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