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Nice comeback, windfall!  Kind of like watching the series on a highlights tape -- only the good parts  -- and then fast-forwarding to the happy ending, still in progress... and I thought the slang was totally push!  PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."
--Stardust, Caroline K
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and I thought the slang was totally push!  Nice. Welcome back, Windfall! That was definitely a feel-good read; thanks for sharing. I may have to break out with some of that slang...I tend to spread a lot of slang words around campus.  JD
"Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy
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That was so sweet! I had tears in my eyes, imagining them 20 years in the future w/ children all grown up, getting emotional watching their first-born graduating college. Pam was right; it was like a series highlight, which was great! A well-written montage! This was a great story! ~NICOLE
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Hi, Beautiful! 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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That was a well done story. I especially loved the travel in Clark's memories And the slang was fun Welcome back to writing! See ya, AnnaBtG.
What we've got here is failure to communicate...
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That was so nice. Very sweet!
Jackie
Superman: I hear you've been looking for me.
Lois: All my life.
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Welcome back, Windfall!  I thoroughly enjoyed it. Tricia 
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very nice story indeed 
I will and always be a big fan of Lois and Clark forever and forever.
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