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#24352 09/25/05 12:14 PM
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Hi,

Great part. hyper


Maria D. Ferdez.
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you've got me intrigued. i have a few ideas about what might be happening - but for now i'm looking forward to more posts so i can see if i'm guessing correctly!

so when can we expect part 5?

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shells


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Lois seemed a little too much first season Lois, but other than that, great post!

I want more soon!!!

James


“…with God everything is possible.” Matthew 19:26.


Also read Nan's Terran Underground!
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You always end it when I'm getting involved! Feeling like a detective, figuring things out!!! I really like the direction this is going in smile

Keep it coming~


~NICOLE

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I really enjoy the verbal swordplay here between Lois and Anna. I think it works well - as does the conversation between Lois and Clark afterwards. Keep it up.

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Thank you for reading the story and your comments.

Maria, your comments for every post keep me going.

Shells and Nicole, there aren't too many really big surprises, but I think it's a worthwhile read, anyway. Glad you're sticking with me.

James, I think Lois may seem season 1, but that could be because that's my favourite Lois.
laugh Would you mind pointing out where you think she's out of character for a married Lois. She might need some tweaking.

ML, loved writing this Lois and Clark. :rolleyes:

Part Five coming up very soon.

gerry

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Going back over it and reading it more throughly, I can understand Lois' reactions. She hates being in the dark about anything and Ann was pushing all the wrong buttons.

Henderson would have at least known to promise an exclusive...

Don't change a thing.

James.


“…with God everything is possible.” Matthew 19:26.


Also read Nan's Terran Underground!

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