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Okay, I'm on a roll! Here's another: Meredith Knight's wonderful Night Errant .

Night Errant WMP

Hope you enjoy!


Wendy

Ooh, good work, Wendy! Good clip selection -- I think my favorite was Lois turning around to see the curtains flapping in Superman's wake...

Terrific story, too! Lots of angst, but a great ending. Which I re-read occasionally. Like maybe today, for instance

PJ

Wow.

I just read the story for the first time few days ago and I was thinking of maybe made a trailer for it, but I'm glad you did before I, because it's a really great trailer.

You captured the heart of the story very well. You selected the clips very well, and the music is perfect. The atmosphere is exactly the one of the story. And the title card hints the story perfectly, but without telling too much about what will happen; it's perfect.

I particularly loved the beginning, with the fire clips mixed with the Lois-Superman kissing clips. That's perfect to tell what was in Clark's mind that night.

I loved your trailer. Thank You for making it.

Oh I have to read this again! You got my favorite kiss in there. It is the one from the trip back in time. I really liked the music to this too Wendy, it fit well. I also like your use of the yellow with floating text. That had a very professional look to it. But of course my favorite part of all your video's is Puzzle. Give that cutie kittie a kiss for me. Laura

Wendy, WOW, another excellent trailer!

I love how you use recurring clips of Lois and Superman. Very effective! The music captures the story's atmosphere superbly.

Thanks for sharing. I thoroughly enjoyed it. I hope you continue to make more trailers.

Tricia

A bit late on actually posting feedback, but I'm here now.

The quick cuts of the emergency scene at the beginning are very effective, not to mention seamlessly edited. You get a real sense that the emergency is still very much on his mind. And, of course, that first title card is a brilliant choice of words.

The other clips your chose were just perfect. Lois and Clark, Superman and Lois, Clark and... that was Linda, right? I won't say why they're perfect so I don't spoil the story, but you obviously know why.

My absolute *favorite* part of this is the title card with the moving text and the flames licking around the corners. Brilliant idea all around with the flames.

Sara

*douses self with water*

Wendy! Looooove this trailer. I agree with what sara says, the flames with the title card is awesome, and very good for the trailer. Fit's perfect. Dang steamy stories. Another one to add to the list to reread again. Oy! Glad I have a few days off. :p Good job!

Rach

And nipping in here too to say many thanks to all of you - I'm so glad you liked the trailer. And I'm especially pleased that so many of you mentioned the story title with flames in the background. That was one of those sudden strokes of inspiration which just seemed to work. It fit in with the theme of fire inserted between the scenes of Superman and Lois.

Poussin, I'm sorry that I pre-empted you on this one, but you know that there's no reason at all why a story shouldn't have two trailers. So if you have ideas go right ahead! Just as two fanfics using a similar premise end up being very different, so do two trailers - just look at the trailers for Are You Lonesome Tonight and For The Greater Good. Go for it! I loved your trailer for A Conscious Choice so I'm sure I'd love one by you for this story too.

I know that Mere hasn't had an opportunity to see this yet - she can't play trailers on her computer and has to wait until she can use a different PC. But I hope that, when you do see it, Mere, you'll be happy with it.


Wendy