For 9,

Nicely done. Good connection. Well written, and no trademarks! smile

I did catch one error. There is a line that starts "Breathlessly, after You need to drop the quotation mark.

For 10,

wildguy to hunt you down and scalp you!

Please tell me that this doesn't last very long?!?

James

“…with God everything is possible.” Matthew 19:26.


Also read Nan's Terran Underground!