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So - to continue or not to continue?
Elle Roberts
She's a dancer who doesn't dance. He's a painter who doesn't paint. It's like a bohemian version of the Island of Misfit Toys. – “Igby Goes Down”
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Swear to God, are you kidding? Of course you should continue! I want to know what happens!  This is great so far, Elle. I'm very intrigued. Will Lois invite Ellen? Will Clark have to make her? What will Ellen say when she finds out? What will Sam do if Ellen isn't invited? You have so many questions to answer, you just can't leave me hanging! “Well Clark, if you feel that way, why don’t we invite kryptonite too?” ROTFL!  That was my favorite line. Very tongue in cheek. More! Soon! Pleaaaaaase! ~Anna (who is ecstatic that someone answered the challenge so quickly and with such a great start!)
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Absolutely continue! 
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great start, elle. fun discussion, good partnership, and some really fun lines. one thing, tho- if marriage is a partnership, then shouldn't lois be open to a little more discussion about the guest list? maybe clark wants to invite ellen... (and i'm curiuos to see if she makes it on the guest list after all). as for inviting kryptonite... well, i suppose you could do that, but don't expect it to fill out a response card. anyway, yeah, i'll add in my vote for more of this.  oh- one last thing. since this is a response to a challenge, shouldn't it have been posted in the challenge folder? Paul
When in doubt, think about penguins. It probably won't help, but at least it'll be fun.
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Continue, continue!!!!
Well who would kryptonite take as a date? :p Sorry, lame joke. They tend to surface around 3am.
"Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy
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you know, jen... that's a really good question.
would kryptonite's date be male or female?
i mean, it's been known to be very close to johnny corbin's heart, but then, it was all over diana stride's lips. maybe it would go with nigel, as a sort of "villain's helper" socializing thing? or maybe the green k would bring the red k? maybe that's how you get hybrid k...
this'll take some thought.
still, i'll bet you whomever kryptonite brings, k's date will be weak in the knees by the end of the night.
Paul
When in doubt, think about penguins. It probably won't help, but at least it'll be fun.
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Yes, you definately need to continue this, Elle. It's a nice start and there are so many things you'll need to answer. So write some more and come back here!
And I agree with Paul, this is supposed to go in the Challange Folder. After all, that's why we have it.
Saskia
I tawt I taw a puddy cat!
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Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Nooooooooooooooooooooooo!!! I thought this was going to be a complete vignette! You mean I have to wait to find out what happens next? Oh and kudos for the title!  Anna beat me to the kryptonite line - definitely a favourite with me too! I liked this enormously, but as for this: So ... should this be continued? I'm shocked - nay appalled! <g> - that you could even ask! More! And soonest, please! LabRat (going over to catch up on part six of West Wind while she waits...)
Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.
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Are you kidding? Of course I want more of this! That was a great discussion in the car -- very funny and in character for both of them. So... you're going to get them to a justice of the peace pronto, right? <g> Anything more elaborate is just tempting fate...
PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."
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Mais oui!!!!!  Sherry
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Elle, The only thing that threw me was the line “You don’t know my mother. She’s a magician when it comes to theis kind of thing. If she wants doves and the London Symphony Orchestra for her daughter’s wedding, she will find a way to get them She's already done that...before INPY.. Can't be any worse than Swiss bell ringers  Please Continue.....we have to know that Lois and Clark will get married safely...or there's going to be a riot
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More! More!! Elle, you are a wonderful new addition to L&C fanfiction! What with your alt-Clark stories, which I'm loving, and the humour in this new one, I can see a bright future ahead of you as a fanfic writer. Just make sure you stick around - we'll nag you to death for more stories, but that's good, right? 
Just a fly-by! *waves*
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Ditto everybody before me. how did she know that the rescue is across the country I was thinking the same thing, but I am guessing that Lois could also hear that passing radio clearly? Is that it? I wish to point your attention to this though. Breaking away, he ran his hand down his cheek before getting out of the jeep and heading towards the alley. I find the mental picture of Clark stroking his own cheek before ducking out to change a little odd. Was it supposed to be her cheek instead? --meclone2-- P.S: Is it just me or is the smiling bouncing thing adorable?
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You can't leave us hanging there,
Marns
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So - to continue or not to continue? Are you kidding?! You can't stop there, it would be sacrilege to stop there! You've given us just enough to get us interested, but not enough to satisfy us. I really want to see how this is going to turn out. Loriel
"Inappropriate attachment" didn't begin to cover the depth of the feelings Vaughn had for Sydney Bristow.
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Should you continue? Are you kidding? Yes! Yes! Finish! Finish! Fun! Fun! Kathy! Kathy! er, I mean ... Kathy
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Hi all - Well, I guess I will be continuing this. As many mentioned, this will be going to the challenges folder from now on. I wanted to post the first part here to gauge reaction and go from there. Thanks for the comments and critiques!!
Elle Roberts
She's a dancer who doesn't dance. He's a painter who doesn't paint. It's like a bohemian version of the Island of Misfit Toys. – “Igby Goes Down”
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Hi Elle I'm glad you are continuing the story... post the next part very soon Meni
Is it a bird?" "Is it a plane?" "No, it's just a guy in tights and a cape!"
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This was so great! I loved the inviting Kryptonite part . Definately continue!!! Alicia
Laura "The Yellow Dart" U. (Alicia U. on the archive)
"A hero is an ordinary individual who finds the strength to persevere and endure in spite of overwhelming obstacles." -- Christopher Reeve
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