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Getting closer! Still not sure how many parts....probably not more than 10....??

Feedback appreciated! Chris


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I see things are moving towards some sort of conclusion. Probably nothing more than the complete destruction of the entire multi-verse. Sounds like fun.

Chris I don't know how you are keeping all the players straight? You must have a scorecard.

Tank (who votes to leave Lena clueless, after all she probably won't exist soon anyway so why bother)

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Hi,

Great part. thumbsup

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"How are you going to do that? You're a complete stranger to her, Lois. I can't stop you from doing this, but if I could still fly… I wouldn't bring you out there, as a matter of principle, as I'm totally against this," Clark asserted. "Let's confront Thorul, try to break him down. Maybe we can give the Planet back to Jim if we play hardball with him. The adults screwed up things – don't make Lena pay."

"Ok, I know your position and respect it," Lois said, as she dialed the number for STAR Labs. "Bernie Klein, please."
I’m with Clark. Is thing are going to change, what’s the use?


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"We can bring you back to your world and you can communicate with Clark, Lois and your grandson via a phantom zone monitor that Lex created. Would you like that?"

Martha started crying. "Of course we'd like to do that. You even have to ask?"

Jonathan put his arms around Martha as she wept openly.

"Speaking of Lex, Hank, what's he doing these days?"

"He's pretty busy, Jonathan… he's the President of the United States."
How things will change in that Universe?


More soon, please. hyper

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Well, I'm on vacation, and it's a rainy day here in CT...so here's part 33!

Thanks for the feedback!


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What a coincidence, it is raining here too. Great part. I'm off to read the next.


Superman: I hear you've been looking for me.
Lois: All my life.

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