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Thank you, Anna! Loved seeing Lois come to her senses and belatedly realize what she'd done to Clark... and brushing off Superman... and first calling then visiting Clark... <sigh> So sweet. Great line about how it probably won't take that long for her to fall in love with him...  Great way to start my day! PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."
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You know I enjoyed this very much, Anna.  I loved Lois dropping by Clark's place and taking the conversation right where they'd left it on the phone, with that "I can't". It was so Lois to expect Clark to catch up right away.  And I adored her revealing to Clark (and to herself) that he's more than a best friend. The end was perfect, too. Loved it! Kaethel
- I'm your partner. I'm your friend.
- Is that what we are?
- Oh, you know what? I don't know what we are. We kiss and then we never talk about it. We nearly die frozen in each other's arms, but we never talk about it, so no, I got no clue what we are.
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Awww! Lovely, Anna! Very nicely done.  The title is perfect. I loved seeing it make sense when Lois told Clark that he was everything to her. So good that the penny dropped and she realised how important he was to her before she did anything irrevocable, isn't it?  And I agree with Pam: great last line! Wendy
Just a fly-by! *waves*
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Beautiful  Jose 
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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very sweet!
Superman: I hear you've been looking for me.
Lois: All my life.
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Okay...  I shouldnt be the one saying this, once I totally LOVE the way BatP is in the original version but... MDL.
"Work while you have the light. You are responsible for the talent that has been entrusted to you."
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Wow! Superb!
If she had to move heaven and Earth, perhaps come back to haunt Perry and explain the story after they'd killed her, she would do it.
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I love it The last part took my breath away  Please write more, I dont like this story to end like that  Karla
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Anna A lovely story! I thoroughly enjoyed it. Tricia 
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Thanks for the nice feedback, FoLCs!! I haven't written fanfic in so long I had almost forgotten what it felt like! Wendy: I forgot to mention it was Kaethel's idea  MDL: If it makes you feel better, no, Lex doesn't die in this version Karla: Please write more, I dont like this story to end like that I can promise nothing. But I'll keep this suggestion in mind Thanks again for your comments! (And, of course, more comments are always welcome!) See ya, AnnaBtG.
What we've got here is failure to communicate...
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Oh wow, oh wow, oh wow What a story!! It pulled my heartstrings, seeing Lois fret over Clark's emotional wellbeing. It was beautiful and sweeeeeeet!! I always felt so bad for Clark in that scene, so this story is so nice, for Lois to see the moment in retrospect and see the anguish in Clark's eyes that was so obvious if only she'd really looked... or paid attention... or allowed herself to see it. Brilliant that you decided to write a story about that!!! ~Nicole
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