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Hi,

Great part. thumbsup

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She found the papers at her foster – parents house! And she came with us, sending her children to an orphanage! And she didn’t tell anything to her husband, but he found out! And now he ‘s after her, too! And that ‘s why he raped her! Because she preferred to help her siblings, rather than joining his team!
All that story is strange. It's more easy to go to the police that all this mess.
confused Why Lois and Clark didn't know about the Black Team?
There have to be more in this mess?


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Jane is a spy of the Black Team!”
For me Sharlynn.
frown All this mess started before Jane appear.

confused What Rachel have that the Black Team want?

More soon, please.

MAF confused


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Anna,
I'm still reading - I'm just behind
probably won't get caught up on this until the weekend- because for me -this is a slow read type of story.
merry

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It's okay, Merry.

I'm happy you keep reading.

Take your time.

See ya,

AnnaBtG.


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Hey Anna smile1

I loved this part. Lots of mystery still to be solved thumbsup

So Jane could be a spy of the Black Team? Interesting....well I vote for Sharlynn too. I think all this mess started before Jane come in.

I'm still sorry for the baby and I'm worried with her. I hope you can solve this soon or you'll give me a heart attack wink

I loved how Clark comforted Lois. It is so typical of him....very sweet and well done Anna thumbsup

Keep writing. I'm looking forward to the next part.

Your friend,
Raquel smile


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Anna,
read this 2 days ago and kept getting interrupted before I got back to replying.
I feel sorry for Jane. She's given up so much. I don't know if I could give up my children.

And I want Lois to get the baby back - soon

more please- I'd say soon but I seem to stay behind on my reading lately.
merry


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