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FDK: Made to be broken - Part 9 #21236 04/25/05 02:15 AM
Joined: May 2003 Posts: 719 L L OP Columnist
OP L Columnist L Joined: May 2003 Posts: 719	This is phenomenal stuff. I am thoroughly hooked!!! I hope you post soon again, because the waiting is really hard (although I know you aren't going to post again today :-) ) Great work! Silence is violence. End white supremacy based violence

Re: FDK: Made to be broken - Part 9 #21237 04/25/05 03:19 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,047 NJ Supes1fan Top Banana
Supes1fan Top Banana Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,047 NJ	Whoa, tough stuff from Clark! You may be sharing the evilness mantle with Wendy these days, leaving us there! How can he think that she would have a choice if it came down to hurting him or not? Luthor was brutalizing her and in her emotionally and physically abused state she must have thought that what she was doing was the 'right' way to avoid more pain for her and maybe Clark? He's not giving her much credit but then again we've seen how emotionally wounded he is from her perceived rejection and his loss of powers and the circumstances. Oh I hurt for them both! Clark you can't run away again and forever..come back and work this out! ~Liz Lois: Can I go? Clark: No. Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go. Clark: Then why do you ask? Lois: I’m trying to be nice.

Re: FDK: Made to be broken - Part 9 #21238 04/25/05 04:42 AM
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Re: FDK: Made to be broken - Part 9 #21239 04/25/05 04:46 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Holy Crap! there I cursed too! More soon. Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: FDK: Made to be broken - Part 9 #21240 04/25/05 07:13 AM
Joined: Sep 2004 Posts: 435 Nashville SuperGEM Beat Reporter
SuperGEM Beat Reporter Joined: Sep 2004 Posts: 435 Nashville	OMG!! WOW! "A hero is an ordinary individual who finds the strength to persevere and endure in spite of overwhelming obstacles." Chris Reeve "Whatever comes our way, whatever battle we have raging inside us, we always have a choice. It's the choices that make us who we are, and we can always choose to do what's right." Peter Parker DON'T DOUBT THE ROUTH

Re: FDK: Made to be broken - Part 9 #21241 04/25/05 11:46 AM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 370 J Julia Beat Reporter
Julia Beat Reporter J Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 370	After reading this part, I stared at my screen for at least 10 minutes, at a total loss for words. This is excellent!! I'm really glad that Lois quit the lying and decided to tell Clark the truth. He shouldn't have run off, though, she needs him so so much!!! More, more, more!! ~Julia

Re: FDK: Made to be broken - Part 9 #21242 04/25/05 02:04 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,627 Gulf Shores, AL Shadow Pulitzer
Shadow Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,627 Gulf Shores, AL	Damn. But this is great stuff! I can't wait for the next installment! JD "Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy

Re: FDK: Made to be broken - Part 9 #21243 04/26/05 06:27 AM
Joined: Oct 2004 Posts: 509 Mexico Karla Kent Columnist
Karla Kent Columnist Joined: Oct 2004 Posts: 509 Mexico	Damn!!! Clark!!! Come back here now and help Lois to feel better, you know tha Superman is not dead, YOU are sopurman, that poor woman Karla My journal: http://charmingkarla.livejournal.com/

Re: FDK: Made to be broken - Part 9 #21244 04/28/05 01:24 AM
Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,145 Likes: 3 Southwest USA T Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer
Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer T Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,145 Likes: 3 Southwest USA	You know, I still think a story where Clark and Lex switch bodies would be cool. However, it would take a back seat to this one for angst and intensity and betrayal. Yikes! How could Lois help Lex clobber Superman? What did he do to coerce her into making that call? And why did Clark suppress that memory? Because of his feelings for Lois? And now that he's in Kansas, will the bright sunshine recharge him? You know there's not as much sunlight in London, and he's been hibernating for a long time. And how will they heal this breach? Will Clark understand how his folks took her in? Can Clark ever forgive Lois? More importantly, will Lois forgive herself? And what about the baby? They're working under a deadline here, and that baby won't wait for Lois to figure out what to do next. Will Lex find them? And will he ever know he's fathered a child? Oh, the humanity! More intense agony soon, please! Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around. - Stephen King, from On Writing

Re: FDK: Made to be broken - Part 9 #21245 04/28/05 03:22 AM
Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada J jackiek Merriwether
jackiek Merriwether J Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada	Incredible! Please don't keep us in suspense long. Superman: I hear you've been looking for me. Lois: All my life.

Re: FDK: Made to be broken - Part 9 #21246 04/28/05 04:43 AM
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OP L Columnist L Joined: May 2003 Posts: 719	Lex and Superboy did change bodies in the Superboy tv series (with Stacy Haiduk and Gerard Christopher) Silence is violence. End white supremacy based violence

Re: FDK: Made to be broken - Part 9 #21247 04/28/05 03:46 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,380 Likes: 1 The Lone Star State Nan Kerth
Nan Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,380 Likes: 1 The Lone Star State	Um, it's Thursday ... Nan Earth is the insane asylum for the universe.

Re: FDK: Made to be broken - Part 9 #21248 04/29/05 07:21 AM
Joined: May 2003 Posts: 385 Philomena's Milking Parlour, T... Sorcha Beat Reporter
Sorcha Beat Reporter Joined: May 2003 Posts: 385 Philomena's Milking Parlour, T...	You know, I think somebody has to come up with another phrase for "Thank you guys, your comments are all so wonderful and I'm gushingly grateful", because it's getting repetitious here I continue to be extremely honoured by these fantastic comments Is it weird that I feel so sorry for them both in my own story? Probably <g> And yes, I'm fully aware that it's all my fault they have anybody feeling sorry for them Quote You may be sharing the evilness mantle with Wendy these days, leaving us there! Wow To think that I may one day be as evil as Wendy... well, wow I'm so thrilled, and so grateful that you guys are hanging in there - I'm aware that it's hard, what with the massive posts and the gap between them. I appreciate it more than I can say! Sara [off to post Part Ten... yikes... about halfway through... ] Death: Easy, Bill. You'll give yourself a heart attack and ruin my vacation. Meet Joe Black

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