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FDK: Have A Little Faith in Me Pt. 20/20- Epilogue #19378 01/15/05 02:57 PM
Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 451 Burbank, California Nicole S OP Beat Reporter
OP Nicole S Beat Reporter Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 451 Burbank, California	This story is officially done (well except for corrections and tightening up and whatnot, before it's archived, but other than that...) You have all been so helpful with your suggestions and encouraging with your comments. I always love all feedback... feel free to leave some again!!

Re: FDK: Have A Little Faith in Me Pt. 20/20- Epilogue #19379 01/15/05 04:02 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Nice job! Very nice ending to a heart breaking story. I love it when alls well that ends well<g> Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: FDK: Have A Little Faith in Me Pt. 20/20- Epilogue #19380 01/15/05 05:59 PM
Joined: Oct 2004 Posts: 509 Mexico Karla Kent Columnist
Karla Kent Columnist Joined: Oct 2004 Posts: 509 Mexico	very sweet end..... I loved it A great end for a great story. I can´t wait to read your next one Karla My journal: http://charmingkarla.livejournal.com/

Re: FDK: Have A Little Faith in Me Pt. 20/20- Epilogue #19381 01/15/05 07:23 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,627 Gulf Shores, AL Shadow Pulitzer
Shadow Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,627 Gulf Shores, AL	Killer ending! Thanks for posting this story; I enjoyed reading it! JD "Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy

Re: FDK: Have A Little Faith in Me Pt. 20/20- Epilogue #19382 01/16/05 03:13 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast daneel Kerth
daneel Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast	Fantastic ending!! "Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot

Re: FDK: Have A Little Faith in Me Pt. 20/20- Epilogue #19383 01/16/05 12:04 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Nice ending. MAF Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK: Have A Little Faith in Me Pt. 20/20- Epilogue #19384 01/16/05 01:03 PM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 370 J Julia Beat Reporter
Julia Beat Reporter J Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 370	Great story , I'm gonna miss it. ~Julia

Re: FDK: Have A Little Faith in Me Pt. 20/20- Epilogue #19385 01/16/05 05:55 PM
Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,145 Likes: 3 Southwest USA T Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer
Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer T Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,145 Likes: 3 Southwest USA	Very good WAFFY story, and I really liked how Lois risked everything to protect Clark. The only suggestion I would make is to break up those marathon paragraphs! The information in them is important to the story, but it's hard to get through a block of text that big. See what I mean? But that's a style comment and not a content comment. This was a very good story. I even liked Lois's progression from "He lied to me!" to "You were protecting yourself and me too." It was logical and reasonable, based on the premise of the story. I read all the installments in one sitting. Good thing I don't pay for online time! You do good work. Write some more! Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around. - Stephen King, from On Writing

Re: FDK: Have A Little Faith in Me Pt. 20/20- Epilogue #19386 01/16/05 08:20 PM
Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 451 Burbank, California Nicole S OP Beat Reporter
OP Nicole S Beat Reporter Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 451 Burbank, California	Thank you all for all your nice comments about the story!! Before it hits the archives, it'll undergo some construction, mostly based on the comments/suggestions from here, all of which were VERY appreciated!! Again, thanks for sticking with the story and giving honest feedback; I really appreciated it!!

Re: FDK: Have A Little Faith in Me Pt. 20/20- Epilogue #19387 01/17/05 07:47 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,837 California fly-over country Artemis Pulitzer
Artemis Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,837 California fly-over country	Great finale, Nicole. I really enjoyed the ride. Yeah, maybe breaking the paragraphs into smaller bits would help. I really thought the content was important to the story and I'd hate to see that cut. Oh! One tiny little thought. I'm curious about the picture of Clark's bioparents. It would be intriguing if Lois could see it. Or else - maybe it's in wavelengths only Clark can see? It might be nice to tie up that little mystery. Keep on writing! Artemis History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis

Re: FDK: Have A Little Faith in Me Pt. 20/20- Epilogue #19388 01/19/05 09:40 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 605 Scotland Jenni Debb Columnist
Jenni Debb Columnist Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 605 Scotland	Hi Nicole, Sorry it took me a while to comment on the ending. I thought you wrapped it up well, and I would also suggest that you broke down the long paragraphs. It does make it easier to read. I think I discovered that after I'd written a few stories, a long time ago. I agree with Artemis, it would have been nice if Lois looked a second time and saw just who was in the picture. Yours Jenni

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