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FDK;Hide and Seek-Part 10 #19127 12/30/04 02:54 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. OP Pulitzer
OP mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great part. Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK;Hide and Seek-Part 10 #19128 12/30/04 03:31 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca... Wendymr Pulitzer
Wendymr Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca...	I agree with Maria, Wanda - while Clark had no choice but to leave Lois when he did, he has to tell her now. Otherwise he'll be responsible for making her much, much worse. Hurry up and post more!! Wendy Just a fly-by! waves

Re: FDK;Hide and Seek-Part 10 #19129 12/30/04 05:13 PM
Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,145 Likes: 3 Southwest USA T Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer
Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer T Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,145 Likes: 3 Southwest USA	Lois's reaction is very consistent with what I've read about and observed myself in women who've been abused, whether it's to the extent that Lois almost experienced or long-term psychological abuse. Clark MUST share his secret with her now. If he doesn't, he will cause even more serious damage. The worst thing for her to think is what she's thinking now, that she's somehow damaged and therefore less than worthy of being loved. Wanda, you have captured Lois's pain, confusion, and self-blame very well. This is a powerful piece, and I'm sure you'll resolve it with tact and honesty. Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around. - Stephen King, from On Writing

Re: FDK;Hide and Seek-Part 10 #19130 12/30/04 07:11 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,627 Gulf Shores, AL Shadow Pulitzer
Shadow Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,627 Gulf Shores, AL	Ugh! That's all I have to say about Clark and his secret. Poor Lois. If Clark doesn't come clean about his secret.../me hunts around for that ole ClueX4... JD "Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy

Re: FDK;Hide and Seek-Part 10 #19131 12/31/04 01:52 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn... T Tank Merriwether
Tank Merriwether T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn...	I've been following this story all along and have to say that I've been enjoying the ride. I must say that even though women who've experienced the type of trauma that Lois often have their logical thinking skewed by the experience, I'm having a little trouble with Lois thinking that Clark has rejected her because she's somehow now unclean. First, she was lucky, and hadn't actually been raped. Assaulted, yes, but not raped. So, technically, she hasn't been 'soiled'. Also, since Clark initiated all the 'romantic' stuff after the incident, and with full knowledge of it, it's hard to conclude that her assault would have been a component of his running off. After all, it's not like he just found out after asking her out and making his move. This is a complicated situation, and I agree with everyone else that Clark's actions can only make it worse. Looking forward to more. Tank (who can't imagine anyone being able to think that a victim of a violent crime was somehow made less by the incident)

Re: FDK;Hide and Seek-Part 10 #19132 12/31/04 02:45 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia T TriciaW Pulitzer
TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Wanda An excellent part! Please post more soon. Tricia

Re: FDK;Hide and Seek-Part 10 #19133 01/01/05 05:28 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast daneel Kerth
daneel Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast	Aaaaww That was bad!! Now he has to tell her the truth!!! Jose "Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot

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