Hi,
Great piece.
Does Hamilton already have the antidote in his lab at STARlab?
The cameras had been on him the whole time, but once you knew where they are, there were ways to obscure, or block their ability to see exactly what you were doing. He could only hope that he'd been clever enough.
Does they really have the antidote?
She felt, rather than saw, when the silent giant of a man entered the room.
Arianna saw her double step away from the door, leaving her next to the large lackey. It was obvious that he was Nigel's man, for he merely stared at St. John until the Englishman deigned to speak.
"Take Miss Carlin away," he said. "You may do with her what you will, but be sure to clean up after yourself."
OMG!
More ASAP, please.
MAF
