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Sorry it's so short, but by posting this part, it will motivate me more to keep writing. Still *so* tired after my three week road trip!

Here's the TOC in case you forgot what the story's about <g>:

Concrete Jungle Love - TOC

Appreciate any/all feedback!

Hi,

Great part.

Interesting.

If they don't get the kryptonite rings thing taken care of pretty soon, Lois is going to being walking around all 'pruney' all the time.

I figured that Thorul was actually Luthor, but we still aren't sure that is the case. Boyle is just guessing, but it does make for some interesting 'double trouble' sorting out the real Luthor from the 'supposed' brother.

Tank (who was never sure there actually ever was a twin brother)

Welcome back, I hope you had a great trip.

This was a great part , I'm really looking forward to more.

~Julia

Hmm, I hope they can find the kid

Jose

Thanks for the feedback, everyone!

Unfortunately my posting schedule has now slowed *way* down -hopefully quality vs quantity -
and I expect to post a chapter of The Third World before the next chapter of CJL is posted.

Since the feedback #'s are down, hopefully some new readers will have time to catch up!

Thanks for the feedback!

Another short chapter is coming up. RL has gotten nasty busy, but I find writing even a short chapter is therapeutic!