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FDK:The Long Road Home-Part 7 #16782 10/25/04 01:17 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. OP Pulitzer
OP mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great part. Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK:The Long Road Home-Part 7 #16783 10/25/04 01:43 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,047 NJ Supes1fan Top Banana
Supes1fan Top Banana Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,047 NJ	Oh jeez here comes Lex! Lois better realize all is not quite kosher with him!! Poor Clark, he just can't say no to her! More soon! ~Liz Lois: Can I go? Clark: No. Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go. Clark: Then why do you ask? Lois: I’m trying to be nice.

Re: FDK:The Long Road Home-Part 7 #16784 10/25/04 04:25 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Nice job, this Lois has a heart! Poor Clark, but I am sure it will all work out in the end. I am looking forward to the rest of the story. Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: FDK:The Long Road Home-Part 7 #16785 10/25/04 07:23 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast daneel Kerth
daneel Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast	Is Clark going to find that Lois has a date with Lex? Jose "Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot

Re: FDK:The Long Road Home-Part 7 #16786 10/26/04 12:08 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn... T Tank Merriwether
Tank Merriwether T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn...	Some nice Lois action here. It will be interesting to see if Lois can be fooled by Lex when she doesn't have the history of having existed in his 'benevolent' world for the last several years. She'd be less likely to 'fall' for his routine (I hope). Clark is a mess. Like Lois says, the man's afraid of his shadow. It should be fun to see how panicky Lois will make him feel. Tank (who thinks that Lois will ferret out Clarks' secret then write her story and win her Pulitzer, and live happily ever after... or not)

Re: FDK:The Long Road Home-Part 7 #16787 10/26/04 09:07 PM
Joined: May 2003 Posts: 244 back home in good ol' Germany Sira Hack from Nowheresville
Sira Hack from Nowheresville Joined: May 2003 Posts: 244 back home in good ol' Germany	Ah, this Lois is much less blinded than our beloved 'original'. She might go on a date with Luthor, but she asks herself the right questions. My heart nearly stopped when she realized how much the not named Superman and Clark resembled each other. That she didn't get the full truth, just shows that the disguise works: you see what you want to see, and nobody would ever suspect mild-mannered Clark Kent... I loved this part and can't wait for the next one! Nit-picky stuff: Quote Lois's draw dropped I believe we agree that it should be her jaw? Sira - (im)patiently waiting.

Re: FDK:The Long Road Home-Part 7 #16788 10/27/04 12:52 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia T TriciaW Pulitzer
TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Erin Another excellent part! Tricia

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