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I apologise for throwing more fic out on the already overcrowded boards. But... it has been a week (hasn't it?). I'm so fried right now I don't know which chapter we're supposed to be on. I hope I guessed right.
If you actually find the time to read this, you can put your comments here.
Tank (who is not only dealing with a lot of convention 'stuff' but now has to face that fact that the job suddenly decided to post a bunch of overtime jobs... argh!)
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Hmmm interesting Tank. I never did like Ariana Carlin Luthor. Poor Lois! I noticed you had to add the little remark about the trim<g> too bad Clark doesn't have his powers back yet to kick that phony Supermans butt. Poor Bill! I liked him. Oh well until next week then. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Kerth
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Good part!  Expecting the "public" return of Superman  Jose 
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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Top Banana
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The plot thickens. And, man, where we go from here I can't imagine, though I'm with Jose. When does our bad Superman start messing with the general public?
Really, really nice exchange between Lois and Clark. Sounded completely natural, just right. And wonderful meeting of the villians!
CC
You mean we're supposed to have lives?
Oh crap!
~Tank
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Poor Lois! Talk about a traumatic experience! Glad that she ran straight to Clark's so that he could take care of her. Is Henderson really cooked??  Meanwhile, on the other side of town.........methinks Mrs. Luthor is a little out of her league compared to Nigel..whatever will happen next? Will the mean, evil Superman clone snatch up Lois?? MORE!  ~Liz
Lois: Can I go?
Clark: No.
Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go.
Clark: Then why do you ask?
Lois: I’m trying to be nice.
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Hi, Great part.
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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I wouldn't put it past you to kill off BH, Tank, but somehow...I think he's still alive.
Time for Clark to start feeling a little more super...maybe levitating in his sleep would be a good start?
Chris
"Together we are stronger than each of us is apart"
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Just a fly-by! *waves*
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Hi Tank, Definitely a very tense part and you have me 'hooked'. Can't wait for the next part. Yours Jenni
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Tank Another excellent part!  I can't wait to see what happens next. Is Henderson really dead? Tricia 
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