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Carol,

Really liked Rachel in this one. Glad you've given her some wisdom and maturity.

It's wonderful to see Lois and Clark knowing that they love each other and would be less without the other half.

Great part!

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Good stuff. I'm still enjoying this. I do think, though, that Rachel is a little too mature and understanding. A nice fit of jealousy might be good about now! wink

At least Lois and Clark have figured out that they belong with each other now. So, is part eight going to be pure smoochies?

The last line is an utter gem, though. Oh, Lois, just figure it out for yourself, dear!

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Hi,

Great part. smile1


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Ross led Rachel to one of the tall tables and sat down across from her. "I talked to Emily last night and she wants to work things out."

"That's great, Ross!"

"The thing is..." Ross took a deep breath. "I have to move to London."

"Ross..."

He cut her off. "No, really, you're obviously moving on, and I do love her and I want to work things out, so I'm going. I quit my job and I leave on Monday."

Rachel had tried to interrupt him and tell him that things between her and Clark were going no where, but he hadn't given her the opportunity. "Monday? That's fast."

"Yeah, but it's really what I want."

"Then, good. Go."
No, no, no, grumble


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"You have some explaining to do..."

"I know."

"... but you could tell me you were Superman and that's why you left and I wouldn’t care!"
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Post soon the last part, Carol notworthy notworthy

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I'm still enjoying this. smile Rachel seems a little to 'grown up' tho its ages since I've seen the London/Emily eps to compare. I'm so g;lad that Lois has finally found Clark and that Rachel isn't going to make things dificult! Lois and Rachel's conversation seems a little wierd but maybe just because we very rarley, if ever actully see Lois having a 'girly' talk!

Loved the last line! rotflol Had to read it 2 or 3 times to make sure I'd read it right, and it didn't say '...moved to NY because you were Superman'! laugh

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A great part! goofy

I can't wait to read the last part.
Please post it soon.

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This is a great part, I loved Rachel here and the last line is very clever! laugh
Can’t wait for the last section... smile

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Carol and Missy
great part
glad they are together
more soon please
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Where is part 8? I missed it or Carol hasn't posted it yet?

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OMG!! I'm soo sorry! I did read part 7 but I never left my feedback. RL has been getting in the way lately.

It was really nice of Racheal to push Lois back to Clark ... How about a bigger smoochie though! Oh, you're saving that for *after* the revelation, I gotcha!

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Carol times up. One week already. smile1

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