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Just One Bad Day Away Part 20 FDK #14030 07/21/04 03:23 PM
Joined: May 2003 Posts: 118 Brazil Ingra OP Hack from Nowheresville
OP Ingra Hack from Nowheresville Joined: May 2003 Posts: 118 Brazil	Great Part!!! Quote When she had first discovered the truth Clark had seemed to suddenly become much more…well, “super”. Now that she’d had time to think about it though, it was Superman who seemed to have become more human. Loved this! Superman = human and not Clark = Super. Lois now knows that he is more human than he wants people to know. And this Quote She really hadn’t appreciated what a good actor he was she though smiling to herself as she began to “fill him in” on the morning’s events. .................................. “I just figure that if you’re home you’re not around to step on my byline,” Lois replied figuring that was probably what she would have been thinking in this situation if she didn’t know the truth. How long is it going to take before Clark finds out Lois knows and how is he going to react? I think he is going to be happy about it considering he wants to be with her, right? Post next Part Soon!!! Ingra Clark: What is that? Lois: It's my word. Clark: There is no such word. Lois: Sure there is. Someone's a chump, therefore, he's chumpy. Clark: Try again. Lois: Are you challenging me? Clark: You bet your sweet little chumpy I am.

Re: Just One Bad Day Away Part 20 FDK #14031 07/21/04 10:59 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia T TriciaW Pulitzer
TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Michael I'm glad that you're posting again. Tricia

Re: Just One Bad Day Away Part 20 FDK #14032 07/22/04 12:18 AM
Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,269 Connecticut ChaaBreh Top Banana
ChaaBreh Top Banana Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,269 Connecticut	Great chapter, Michael! I wish you'd post more often but I understand how "RL" gets in the way! Can't wait for Lois to spill the beans that she knows he's Superman. Interesting how she is analyzing him more now.... Post again soon Chris "Together we are stronger than each of us is apart"

Re: Just One Bad Day Away Part 20 FDK #14033 07/22/04 09:42 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Nice one. More soon. Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: Just One Bad Day Away Part 20 FDK #14034 07/22/04 10:22 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn... T Tank Merriwether
Tank Merriwether T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn...	Good instalment. Since it's been awhile it took a few moments to get back into the flow of the story, but once I did... bam! I was never too fond of the Slade Wilson/Deathstroke character in the comics. They seemed to swing him back and forth between reluctant hero and villian whenever it was convenient. Too much ambivalence. But your Slade is definitely not a nice man. Keep him in character. Your Lois continues to live up to my high expectations and I'm enjoying her mental confusion as to what to do about her 'partner'. You also continue to use the comic book supporting cast very well. I like the dynamic between Maggie Sawyer and Lois. Anothe solid instalment. More, sooner. Tank (who figures that Lois and Clark will have a few more bumps to get over before things get to running smoothly between them)

Re: Just One Bad Day Away Part 20 FDK #14035 07/22/04 12:04 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great part. Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: Just One Bad Day Away Part 20 FDK #14036 07/22/04 04:59 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 111 Aussie Fearless Monkey Hack from Nowheresville
Fearless Monkey Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 111 Aussie	Great part Michael. Have I told you before that I love how you write Lois? Very well done. And your action scenes are great. I had nearly forgotten about this fic, which means you need to post more often Avatar: Michael Clarke, awesome Aussie cricket player

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