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Hi, Beautiful!  He was always trying to get home early, but he could seldom make it. His wife would probably be sleeping by the time he arrived and, although she understood his duties, for which he was very thankful, at times it hurt him deeply. You almost fool me there. 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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Nice surprise ending~
Has anyone ever written a story about Perry and Alice - how they met, fall in love, etc? I know this is about Lois and Clark, not Perry and Alice, but....
It might be interesting.
Chris
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You had me until the end.
Good vignette.
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Yep, count me fooled, too  Well done, Erica! Keep it up! See ya, AnnaBtG.
What we've got here is failure to communicate...
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A nice twist at the end!  Thanks for sharing this.  Tricia 
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"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."
--Stardust, Caroline K
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Short but sweet, Mad Dog! Keep them coming.  LabRat ![[Linked Image]](http://www.sg1archive.com/forums/html/emoticons/scotland.gif)
Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.
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Ohhhhh,  so many postings!!! I just expected one posting from my BR.  I guess the encouraging bottle of wine worked after all. Guys, thank you, thank you, thank you so much for your support. I was really too embarassed to post a piece in here but u make it seem so easy that I couldn´t resist. I am really speechless. This was my first MLTV and I didn´t expect it to be so warm-welcomed here. FOLCs you are just... SUPER!!! 
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I laughed out loud when I got the end! Hadn't expected that ending at all. And, Lab, I think she has a ton of these little things tucked away in her head! SQD
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Oh... there you are my BR !!! 
"Work while you have the light. You are responsible for the talent that has been entrusted to you."
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