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Hi, Great part.  MAF
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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Beat Reporter
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Great part!  Perry and Alice really don't divulge anything. This sure looks like Lois has to talk to Clark about it. Let's just hope he answers :rolleyes: ...and her mother was in a long-term care facility for the mentally ill.   Yikes, is it really that bad? Looking forward to more, ~Julia
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Top Banana
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This is not going where I'm fearing it's going to, isn't it? Her dream is only a personification of her fears, not a... memory? I look forward to know what are you going to do with it! Simona 
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Good instalment. A little of the reporter slipping through at the White's.
Simona brings up an interesting notion. One that would go a long way toward explaining why Lois' recovery is moving so slowly.
The mind is a tricky, and complicated thing.
I am curious though, with her seeming to be able to function competently on a daily basis, that there isn't some agitation from the institution's accounting office (or whomever is paying the bills) to throw Lois out of the facility and make her an outpatient.
The studio apartment sounds rather expensive.
Tank (who would just like to mention that he does have a river that runs past his backyard which would be a nice peaceful thing for Lois to sit and watch while she recovers... yes?)
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Good short part. More soon. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Merriwether
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Sorry, this is going to be a small section  . . . the next scene is fairly long . . . 
Do you know the most surprising thing about divorce? It doesn't actually kill you, like a bullet to the heart or a head-on car wreck. It should. When someone you've promised to cherish till death do you part says, "I never loved you," it should kill you instantly.
- Under the Tuscan Sun
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