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Sorry for the delay in posting FDK. Been without power since last Thursday and just got it back a little while ago.


Poor Alan, so bashful and shy, but at least his principles are in the right place.

The scene with Luanne seems familiar. Was there another story that had a similar scene? For some reason I remember reading a scene where Alan was being bashful with another undercover agent and Mark walking in.

Anyway, love the setup for this and looking forward to the rest.

James

There are only two similar scenes that I know of, James: the one in the Mines of Kuloghi when Dalik offers Alan his wife, and the one in Symbiote when Cindy approaches Alan in the bar, just before the barroom brawl. None of them got as far as this one looked like it was going, and none of them had Mark walking in.

Nan

It was definitely the one with Cindy, now that I have a name. I guess I must have just filled in too much with my memory!

Love this story! Thanks of a second posting. Will be reading it shortly.

James.

Love Dannar

I don't know how I missed it, but I only noticed tonight that you were posting another story -- I'll have to catch up with the rest of the sections later, as it's off to church at the moment

PJ

I'm looking forward to reading this. A Dannar story is almost as good as a Julia story.

The restaurant with all of its extra ambience sounded truly disgusting. I wonder if Toomelli's Moon will be as charming as Shallock.

With General Kaley's arrest it makes sense that so many Jils are scanning actively for Terran empaths. I hope the "Sheneral" doesn't mind a bit of extra help from a team or two with no official orders yet.


Elisabeth