Hi guys
And thank you for your comments on this section. Things seem to be hotting up a little now, maybe?
I'm really pleased that Luthor came across as nicely menacing - as to whether Lois should suspect him or not, Maria, I don't think that she has enough information yet to make her thoughts go in that direction. And, of course, we don't
actually know yet what he is responsible for, if anything - or how much.
Nan, I love to hate Lex too, and I adore writing him.
I think, given your more recent stories, we share that enjoyment of writing a very scary, yet superficially urbane, Lex, but also like to give him a suitable downfall - once our heroes have managed to make him suffer a bit.
So you never know...
Pam, I'm really glad you liked that scene in the parking garage where Lois broke down.
That was partly Kaethel's doing - she said something which made me add several paras, including putitng more weight on Lois's moment of despair. So thanks, Kae!
Tank, what makes you think this is heading to BatP/HoL territory? Sure, Luthor seems to be getting ready to make moves on Lois; but remember that Lois and Clark seem very sure that he's not what he appears. Do you really think that Lois would be susceptible to advances from Lex now? All the same, I suppose you never know...
Well, I should warn all of you who are still following this story that posting is going to be somewhat more erratic from now on. As some people know, I am about to emigrate - from the UK to Canada - and we will be homeless for a while until we buy a house over there. We'll be staying in hotels and hope to have internet connection most of the time, but the story is still being written, which means I need time to write as well as online time. All this means that posts may be more spaced out than they have been, but I will try to let you know each time I post an instalment roughly how long it might be before a new post.
Thanks again, all! More later.
Wendy
I also liked the bit out on the street where she called him Clark, and he had to remind her that Clark wasn't there. That just felt right -- she *would* forget, under the circumstances, and that's the perfect way to remind her.
