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Hi,

Great piece.

More ASAP, please.

MAF

Yay, I'm glad to see this story back. It's very fun taking a jump back into the past, especially with another person's (Clarissa) reaction to everything.

Jen

Very nice! Wouldn't we all like to go back in time and do this?? Great stuff!

Please post #5 soon?

Very, very nice -- and Clarissa is definitely her mother's daughter.

One possible minor nit-pick: you have Jonathan saying that Clark came from another planet -- is that a quote from the pilot, or author's license? If the latter, you might want to change it because the Kents (all 3 of them) didn't know where Clark came from at that time; it wasn't until Clark found the Globe at the B39 warehouse that he'd even heard of Krypton.

Still, I join the others in hoping for more of this soon.

Phil

Yes, it's in the pilot. I thought I remembered it, but I went back to check and be sure. It's there. I guess the writers goofed.

Nan

Where is going to take her now?

Jose

Great part ! It's fun to see it all over again from a completly different point of view. Clarissa's reactions are really cute.

Please post the next part soon.

~Julia

Enjoyable story, can't wait to see where they go next.
James