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Hmm... what to say, what to say? Why not stick to the basics, I say.

NEXT!!!!!!!!!

PJ
who's curious what titles you'll keep coming up with

Hope nobody finds these letters cause they're telling secrets all over the place.

Dang! So is Clark waiting for her or is it Splat?

TEEEEEEJ

Hi,

Great piece.

TJ!!!! This is... this is... a very interesting idea!
there'll be a TE too, Wendy?

Simona
(who thinks this is a very good premise: a devilish villain finds very compromising letters written by Lois and Clark... it'd be able to become a dramatic Wendy-stile story! I had never read something about it on the fanfic archive)

Kaethel and Wendy, thank you!!!

HeeHee Simona, actually a subject like that(Clark's secret getting typed out) was covered in "Getting to Know You" Series and that was ALLLLLLL EMAIL!!!! eeeeerrrrk!!!

TEEEEEJ
<who's still wondering if Lois is going SPLAT!>

Wonderful Kaethel!
I think I can feel the very talented author of "Surfacing memories" and "Point of no return"! (two favourite stories of mine)
Can I persuade you two to go for the happy ending in the next sequel? yes, I know I was speaking about TE, but perhaps for a delayed alternative ending?

Simona
(who knows that probably there are mistakes in grammar but who have no time to check right now)

*sniff* So beautiful and excellent introspection! And she came to the right decision!!

Saskia

Great job Helene, now is it Wendy's job to respond the Lois's letter? This is great guys, I can't wait to see how Clark reacts to it. Laura

For some reason, I'm thinking the next part will be really, really short. Lois goes to the window and finds Clark has stuck a post-it note: "Something exploded, had to go, back later"

PJ

Lovely, girls!!

Wow, this is an excellent little series. Very touching and I always like it, when they finally become honest with each other *sigh*

What's next?

~Julia (impatiently waiting for sequel #3 )

I see that Kae's new short do has given her the inspiration to join with Wendy and complete this little exercise in letter writing.

But Kae? Where is the haircut you demanded in the comments thread to the previous part? I'm pretty sure I would have noticed it if it had happened.

Anyway, nice job ladies.

Tank (who will now count on Kae, who has come to her folicle senses, to be a stout defender of the short-haired Lois)

I love these series

Jose

Both of you make a great writing squad. <g> Really have a way with words. Lois is clearly in a torn sort of state - mad, but in love, etc.

And the end is so... sweet!!!

Julie (who hopes the next one won't include a splat OR a thud)

Evening, all!

Well, we're both really, really pleased with the reaction to this latest part of the Yesterday series.

When I BRd the first two letters for Wendy (and another one that will come in a few minutes), I was in awe at the way the emotion crackled off the page of course, and the Muse was suddenly too inspired so I butted in on poor Wendy's series. I'm very grateful to her for letting me co-author this one (and later ones); as always, writing together was loads of fun. So to clarify, we're not writing one letter each!! The series was started by Wendy, but a few stories (like this one) were written by the two of us together, like we've done countless times before.

Now, on to your comments. Some of you bring up an interesting point - what if a villain found those letters? It's true that they reveal pretty big secrets, and in a way you're right: they should probably destroy those at some point. But... just not now. Sometimes it's nice to give in to the temptation of leading a normal life, and that includes writing letters to the one you love.

Maria was obviously surprised with the end of this letter:

LOL! Not sure that killing him with the first thing on her mind when she gets her hands on him. But who knows?

Wendy and Kaethel

Sorry I'm late here. I love this letter.

Tricia

Oh, I'm even later than Tricia, so I'm sorry.

Anyway, Wendy, glad to see you decided to keep going with this letter series, and Kaethel - this is an excellent installment! Glad you've joined the campaign <g>.

These are so wonderful. Love the honesty portrayed that can only be expressed in a letter - Lois and Clark saying things that they want to say but are so hard to communicate in face to face dialogue.

I can already picture the epilogue. Clark right after Lois's funeral or a future Kent offspring finding these faded love letters in a bundle in a trunk and reading through them.

Lovely!
Lynn

Tricia and Lynn, thank you both for your comments!

And Tricia, Lois and Clark *talk*?!? What do you mean they're going to talk?!?

W and Kae

I can just see Lois sitting with wadded pieces of paper scattered all around her as she's trying to put her feelings down on paper, not a bad exercise for someone who finds putting her emotions down on paper easier than talking about them.

Of course by then, Clark could have rescued half the cats in the city before Lois gets around to opening that window. As I said in the last comment, though, Clark can't be there. If he's there, why would they need to write another letter? Better that Clark walks away bitterly disappointed with his cape dragging along behind him. Clark torture and angst. Sounds like a good combination. You could get Yvonne to co-write that part.

Clark should bring in Lois' abominable behavior during the BatP/HoL arc to make her feel less angry over it. She never gave him a good reason to tell him. After all, he never told any of his other best friends.

Anyway, I may have to pick up the last three letters later since it's bedtime. Looking forward to the next one. Nice Kae and Wendy!