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Lois Lane walked into the elegant ballroom in the equally elegant penthouse which was hosting tonight's White Orchid Ball. She was in awe of the beauty of the room. It was the event of the social season and everyone who was anyone would be there. Lois, of course, was interested in only one individual. She was a woman on a mission and she wouldn't be swayed from her purpose for being there, no matter how impressive the place was.

Lois tried to casually adjust her gown, which was pinching her butt just a tad too much. She moved into the center of the room and cast her gaze around her. Just then the sun, refusing to completely give in to the western horizon, shot one last ray through the huge windows which made up nearly the entire west wall. Everyone's gaze automatically followed the stubborn sunbeam as it spotlit the huge central staircase.

A man stepped into that spotlight. He was as impressive as was his home; and he was the objective of Lois' mission.

She stepped boldly into a clear space on the floor. "Clark Kent, why haven't you returned my phone calls?"


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Hmmm... I'm almost certain I've seen it SOMEWHERE [but don't hold me to that].

I know I've seen it be others - I've used Bruce Wayne a time or two.

Clark Kent is definitely an interesting take on it =D.

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So Lex works for the DP and is a good guy?


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I think there was a story like that already, although Lex proved to be a Claude-act-alike, so to speak. I'm not exactly sure, but it might have been LaraMoon's "Reversal of Fortune". Only there is no White Orchid Ball involved.


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I like the Clark Kent take on it, although I hope he doesn't turn out to be like Lex Luthor!


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I like the Clark Kent take on it, although I hope he doesn't turn out to be like Lex Luthor!
A Lex Luthor-type with Superman's powers is a truly horrific thought to contemplate...Let's hope that in that very alternate universe, there's plenty of kryptonite handy...

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I'm new to writing, but this piqued my curiosity and I spent twenty or so minutes with a word processor and this is what came out. I don't know whether or not to pursue it, really.


Time slowed to a crawl. Lois fought against the knots in her stomach; if he didn't grant an interview after tonight, she'd get on his secretary's blacklist for sure. Maybe she already was; but that was the reason she was making this request in person. His jaw dropped, just barely enough that she was able to register the movement.

“Lois Lane, Daily Planet.”

His gaze traveled up her legs before jerking to her face. Ah, so he was willing to ogle, but he didn't like to get caught. She filed the information away: 'Interviews: Celebrities: Playboys'. Processing it reminded her to what end she was making herself vulnerable to this powerful man.

Heads turned in their direction as he responded in an undertone, “Miss Lane.” He offered his arm, which she took only to have him maneuver her out of the spotlight. She followed him graciously, tamping down the urge to keep him in the center of the room, away from the crowd, where he'd have no distractions from her. He stopped moving, and she looked up to see another man, suave and debonair, who greeted her with a charming smile.

“Have you met my associate, Mister Luthor, Miss Lane?”

“No. It's a pleasure.” She held out her right hand, but kept the left firmly affixed to Kent's arm. He wasn't getting away that easily.

Luthor took her hand to kiss it. “A pleasure, indeed. I can assure you, if you ever call on me, I will answer.” At Luthor's action, she felt the muscles in Kent's arm stiffen. Unexpectedly, a tingle ran up her arm at his reaction, rather than Luthor's intimate gesture. She smiled slightly to cover her surprise. 'Interviews: Celebrities: Jealosy.' That was better.

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Don't stop there, Grace.

Keep going!

You've thrown so many plot ideas into the air and I'd really like to see how they fall.

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Yes, Grace, I'm with Corinna in that I would also like to see where you go with this - so you can gladly continue smile

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Yes, please keep going on this.

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I love your style! Please don't stop there!


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Yes, you've thrown a bit of meat to the hungry wolves. Now you must continue or the wolf pack will devour you. wink

(Just kidding. But do write more, you've got a wonderful opener.)

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Thanks, everyone, for the encouragement! My word processor and I are going to mull this over a bit, maybe a week. Where did Clark's money come from? What's the deal between Clark and Lex? And, with both Clark and Lex accounted for, who went as Lois' date? (I have tentative answers for all these, but the last is proving to be the trickiest to decide.)

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Lois' date, in this particular setting, should be Jimmy. He is insignificant enough so she can just tell him to wait and do her thing with Clark.


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And don't forget, he's also perfect for taking over Clark's part from the show where he interrupted Lois and Luthor dancing laugh

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Yep. Jimmy interruptus with a twist. laugh Only the floating part won't work for him. A pity, but it can't be helped.


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Originally posted by Grace Flannagan:
I'm new to writing, but this piqued my curiosity and I spent twenty or so minutes with a word processor and this is what came out. I don't know whether or not to pursue it, really.


Time slowed to a crawl. Lois fought against the knots in her stomach; if he didn't grant an interview after tonight, she'd get on his secretary's blacklist for sure. Maybe she already was; but that was the reason she was making this request in person. His jaw dropped, just barely enough that she was able to register the movement.

“Lois Lane, Daily Planet.”

His gaze traveled up her legs before jerking to her face. Ah, so he was willing to ogle, but he didn't like to get caught. She filed the information away: 'Interviews: Celebrities: Playboys'. Processing it reminded her to what end she was making herself vulnerable to this powerful man.

Heads turned in their direction as he responded in an undertone, “Miss Lane.” He offered his arm, which she took only to have him maneuver her out of the spotlight. She followed him graciously, tamping down the urge to keep him in the center of the room, away from the crowd, where he'd have no distractions from her. He stopped moving, and she looked up to see another man, suave and debonair, who greeted her with a charming smile.

“Have you met my associate, Mister Luthor, Miss Lane?”

“No. It's a pleasure.” She held out her right hand, but kept the left firmly affixed to Kent's arm. He wasn't getting away that easily.

Luthor took her hand to kiss it. “A pleasure, indeed. I can assure you, if you ever call on me, I will answer.” At Luthor's action, she felt the muscles in Kent's arm stiffen. Unexpectedly, a tingle ran up her arm at his reaction, rather than Luthor's intimate gesture. She smiled slightly to cover her surprise. 'Interviews: Celebrities: Jealosy.' That was better.
Grace, I really love this idea and would love to see what you do with it.


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First off, you have to continue this, Grace! Your style is terrific.

Second, since we're playing havoc with canon to begin with, I think Lois's date should be Claude--although not necessarily the Claude we all know and loathe.

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Or she could set this in alt-Universe where Lois knows that Clark Kent = Superman, which is why she wants the interview so badly. Sorry, I'm a sucker for alt-Clark. laugh Although, why he'd be in league with Lex L. huh

I notice this thread started last year. So, Grace, was this story ever written?


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