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That's all, folks. Thanks for sticking with the story, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. I know I enjoyed writing it.
I look forward to seeing your final comments!
AnnN.
To thine own self be true.
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Top Banana
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So Clark goes to the Congo for leads instead, and Tempus backs off because he's afraid of Bolt and Superman.
Nice world...how do you visit?
Lois has kids nice'n'early....guaranteeing Utopia.
Very satisfying ending.
And, of course, a sequel is NEVER out of the question.
Chris
"Together we are stronger than each of us is apart"
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Kerth
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Nice wrapping  And is Kevin going to have a girl for Jonathan?  Jose 
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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Nicely wrapped up.
Great way to solve the Congo issue.
James
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Hi, Beautiful story. 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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Top Banana
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Very nice wrap up!! I liked this story alot, a new twist on the beginning of the story we all know so well. Enjoyable read Ann!  ~Liz
Lois: Can I go?
Clark: No.
Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go.
Clark: Then why do you ask?
Lois: I’m trying to be nice.
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Just wanted to say that I enjoyed this story immensly(sp?). It was fun, fresh, original and exciting. Sorry I didn't have time to give comments along the way. Unlike others, I wanted more information about Kevin. We all pretty much know Lois and Clark are going to get together eventually, so I was more interested in what was going on with Kevin/Bolt.
Great story. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.
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Jeff
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Beat Reporter
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Cindy, I just popped in to finish reading Bolt, and I enjoyed the wrap-up. I liked seeing Tempus thwarted, so that made a nice ending. Good story 
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Kerth
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Delightful. I just read it today and I really like your version of the AltWorld and Superman. Bolt was cute too. For others Bolt, From Dubuque is in the archive at Bolt
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