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Comments - Long Strange Trip 57 #12568 05/02/04 02:57 PM
Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,269 Connecticut ChaaBreh OP Top Banana
OP ChaaBreh Top Banana Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,269 Connecticut	It's great that Lois has finally purged herself of Lord Kal, to the point that she knows she's meant to be with Clark. And now she knows that he really loves her, not the other Lois. A trip to see the Alt-Bernie is just what the doctor ordered (forgive the pun)!! Post soon, no pressure, of course! Chris "Together we are stronger than each of us is apart"

Re: Comments - Long Strange Trip 57 #12569 05/02/04 03:38 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Ya you posted! Now they are together again! Thank you! Everything will be OK and that is all I need to know right now. Of course I am curious as to what is going to happen to the clone. More soon. Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: Comments - Long Strange Trip 57 #12570 05/02/04 11:22 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia T TriciaW Pulitzer
TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Leela Another fantastic part! Tricia

Re: Comments - Long Strange Trip 57 #12571 05/02/04 11:50 PM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 1,047 where the 7 hills and 3 rivers... CC Aiken Top Banana
CC Aiken Top Banana Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 1,047 where the 7 hills and 3 rivers...	I love that you gave our Clark the satisfaction of facing down a Luthor. And I love the way he did it! Again can't compliment you enough on your ability to write all those characters in conversation in the same place and have it read so easily. So, all is well? AltClark gets fixed up by Bernie, and our L&C return to their universe, and...? Are we reaching a resolution? Not sure I want this story to ever end. CC You mean we're supposed to have lives? Oh crap! ~Tank

Re: Comments - Long Strange Trip 57 #12572 05/03/04 01:34 AM
Joined: May 2003 Posts: 719 L L Columnist
L Columnist L Joined: May 2003 Posts: 719	CC - I am hoping resolution is forthcoming. I'd really like to finish this before my youngest daughter, who didn't even exist - not even in embryonic form - when this was started. But yeah - all is going well... I apologize to you, and everyone else for the easy resolution of the abduction. I wasn't interested in writing a difficult scene with Luthor involved - so I just made it "easy". Hope it doesn't mar the enjoyment of the story. Leela Silence is violence. End white supremacy based violence

Re: Comments - Long Strange Trip 57 #12573 05/03/04 01:36 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA ChiefPam Pulitzer
ChiefPam Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA	Wow, Leela... you're wrapping things up so very smoothly! Not only do we get Luthor taken away in disgrace (yay! and lol at Clark's exchange with him), but Lois gets to see that her Clark loves her, not our Lois. If that sentence made any sense And that's on top of Lois really knowing that Clark is not Lord Kal, which will be very dis-inhibiting Can't wait for the next part!! [Edit after seeing you'd posted at the same time I did -- no, I don't think it was too easy. It all flowed logically, and that let you get back to the important part of the story, which has nothing to do with policework and evidence.] PJ "You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed. He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement." "You can say that again," she told him. "I have a...." "Oh, shut up." --Stardust, Caroline K

Re: Comments - Long Strange Trip 57 #12574 05/03/04 03:58 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast daneel Kerth
daneel Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast	Yay!! They rescued Clark!! Jose "Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot

Re: Comments - Long Strange Trip 57 #12575 05/03/04 04:44 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,047 NJ Supes1fan Top Banana
Supes1fan Top Banana Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,047 NJ	You did not take the easy way out at all Leela! This was a very believable resolution esp. since we had our Clark on the scene to help out. Yay! Lois knows that their love is stronger than her fears. Clark is safe and now they can explore all that passion we saw earlier! Feel better quickly Clark! ~Liz Lois: Can I go? Clark: No. Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go. Clark: Then why do you ask? Lois: I’m trying to be nice.

Re: Comments - Long Strange Trip 57 #12576 05/03/04 05:28 AM
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Anonymous Unregistered A	Now Clone abuse therapy is still a very viable option here right??? Either that or Lord Kal needs to be on the receiving end eventually. I like this series so don't feel the need to wrap up too soon. Vengence is a very good story motivator. TEEEEEJ

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