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FDK-City By the Sea 6/? #12402 04/26/04 06:17 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast daneel OP Kerth
OP daneel Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast	Nice trip Looking forward tomorrow's date Jose "Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot

Re: FDK-City By the Sea 6/? #12403 04/26/04 09:27 AM
Joined: May 2003 Posts: 244 back home in good ol' Germany Sira Hack from Nowheresville
Sira Hack from Nowheresville Joined: May 2003 Posts: 244 back home in good ol' Germany	Oh wow!!!!!!! What a chapter! I was glued to my PC screen, I tell you. The emotion was almost palpable. You convey their feelings and thoughts in an indescribable way that captures the reader (at least me) and doesn't let him/her go. I can't wait to find out what will happen on their date the next day and what after that. Although I'm starting to share Lois' anxiety of what will happen if/when Clark remembers. Keep the story going, I'll be (im)patiently waiting to find out what happens next! ~Sira~a sucker for romance

Re: FDK-City By the Sea 6/? #12404 04/26/04 10:43 AM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 370 J Julia Beat Reporter
Julia Beat Reporter J Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 370	Great part! I particularly liked how you described Clark's/Charlie's confusion. Some memories are trying to come back to him, but he can't quite grasp them yet. Can't wait to see what happens next. Post again soon, please. Julia

Re: FDK-City By the Sea 6/? #12405 04/26/04 12:16 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 89 LaurieD Freelance Reporter
LaurieD Freelance Reporter Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 89	Great job, Robin! I'm completely hooked. LaurieD

Re: FDK-City By the Sea 6/? #12406 04/26/04 03:27 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 231 a lab in the pink sector of su... IsisLnC Hack from Nowheresville
IsisLnC Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 231 a lab in the pink sector of su...	WOW! Is it morning yet? Is it morning now? When's it gonna be morning?!?!?!?! ~Jen

Re: FDK-City By the Sea 6/? #12407 04/27/04 12:02 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn... T Tank Merriwether
Tank Merriwether T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn...	Pretty intensely waffy there. Lois has allowed herself to completely let go and fall for Charlie/Clark because of the long soul searching she has done over the years about Clark. Getting him back, sort of, is like a gift from the fates. Charlie, is just being a guy, falling for this gorgeous, witty woman. Though he does have these 'feelings' that there's more to this Lois Lane than just what he's seen so far. Lois knows, Charlie doesn't, that has to spell disaster at some point. Tank (who wonders when a villian will appear)

Re: FDK-City By the Sea 6/? #12408 04/27/04 02:47 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great part. More ASAP, please. MAF Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

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