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Aw..........that was sweet and cute! I loved the ending with Perry finding out that Clark was Superman!!!
Great job!
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GREAT job, I love this story  . It’s just like when I watched Lois & Clark on TV the first time. Every time an episode ended, I couldn’t wait for the next one, curious of what was going to happen next . Perry found out that Clark is Superman 
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LOL Very cute and I loved the ending with Perry and Jimmy too. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
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Caryn A great finish! I thoroughly enjoyed it and look forward to reading more of your work. Tricia 
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I really like the scene at the end with Perry and Jimmy as well. It reminded me too of a real episode. Would it be too much to ask for .... more?
I love warm and happy stories!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Awesome! Many thanks for this wonderful story.
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Oh, what a great ending! I cracked up at the end with Perry and Jimmy's conversation! 
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An excellent ending!  Sweet and waffy with L&C, and then you circle back to the outsider's perspective you started with (Jimmy & Perry) for a very funny finish <g> And you have a definite gift for snappy end lines! Thanks for letting me work with you a little bit on this, Caryn! It's been great fun PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."
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LoL!
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Absolutely love the Getting to Know series. And ditto Jose on "where is the tattoo?" :p
If she had to move heaven and Earth, perhaps come back to haunt Perry and explain the story after they'd killed her, she would do it.
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Replying with the majority here, you've gotta do a FIC based on tattoo hunting. You'll probably have to use the other folder though  TEEEEJ
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AW, what an incredible sweet story. I totally love your "Getting to Know" series. I take it you're planning on writing a sequel? We really need to find out where that tatoo is, don't you think?  Julia
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Thanks everyone! I'm glad you liked it. I want to know what happens next Is there a possibility of "sequels"? Boy, you guys don't ask for much do you? LOL!! Would it help to know that I'm working on that right now?  Thanks for letting me work with you a little bit on this, Caryn! It's been great fun No, Pam--thank you! I'm so glad that you *wanted* to work on it with me!! Replying with the majority here, you've gotta do a FIC based on tattoo hunting. You'll probably have to use the other folder though Okay I think I've got the hint here. Several of you probably won't let me live if I *don't* write a story to where exactly Lois's tattoo is at. Hmmmm....this could be a lot of fun. I just bet you all would love if I did use the "other" folder. Thanks for letting me share the fic with all of you. And Tricia thanks for pointing the way here so I can be part of this fun group! Caryn
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Caryn And Tricia thanks for pointing the way here so I can be part of this fun group! I'm glad you took my advice. Tricia
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Hi, Great story.  MAF
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BRAVO! SEQUEL! This series was brilliant. You expressed Lois' deepest feelings so transparently that I felt like I was a voyeur. Kudos!
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A great sequel to the other two stories, Caryn.  But then she realised that he'd been equally honest with her... and even more so. Loved her realising that he loves her too. And then her reaction to 'Clark Jerome Kent, also known as Kal-El'... woohoo!!  Welcome to the boards - now, when's your next story coming? Wendy
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Thanks Wendy. I'm glad to be part of the boards. As for the next story, would it help to know that I'm actually working on it?  The first part of it will probably be up by the first of next week. Caryn
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