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Nice work, Gerry!!

Sorry I haven't been here all along; work's been a nightmare and I've had two three-day business trips in as many weeks. :p Anyway, thanks for posting the last two parts at once!

I really, really liked Lois and Superman's talk! It was excellent on a number of levels. First, Lois giving Superman the courage to go on is always great to read; the strongest man in the world needing someone to lean on is just so much part of the Lois and Clark story. But add to it Lois being mad at Superman anyway, and Clark having forgotten that she was staying at his place and being barely able to remember that he needed to cover up for himself... I loved it.

So Mayson's mother was the weak link all along - I'm glad she found out herself rather than Clark having to tell her. I don't think that's a conversation he would have avoided, unlike other ones... but still, it would have been very hard for her to take coming from anyone else.

And you ended with a revelation too!

Thanks for this story, Gerry - I really enjoyed reading it.


Wendy

Every time I read about Mayson's car exploding and Clark not saving her in time...I feel very sad. Especially when she forgives him in the end about being Superman. Good development of her character and her family. You made us care about her, Gerry.

Does the word resurrection = sequel??? Just wondering.

I vote for one, if it does. Great job!. Chris

Hi,

Great story.

Gerry

A fantastic finish!
I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Tricia

I liked this story a lot, I always looked for it when I came on this site. It went too fast.

Seriously 11 & 12 were speedy, it was like Boom here's the end after the big build up.

Also I was thinking it was sad that Mayson died in this version, I was probably coming to the wrong conclusion that you were hinting around at keeping her on, at least for a little while.

Anyway great dialogue and looking forward to your next story!

TEEEJ

Two parts!!!

But you killed her!!

Well, at least Lois knows the truth when Agent Sard... I mean Scardino appears

Jose

Good finish. Some classic conversations here.

We have the Lois offers Superman a shoulder and words of wisdom conversation, then we have the 'we both really want to be more than friends' conversation.

Finally, we get the 'oops, I'm Superman, but luckily you're not mad' conversation.

I wonder what our intrepid duo will do now that they are all 'talked' out.

Tank (who thinks maybe Gerry should do a sequel so Lois can have a chance to get a proper haircut)