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Great installment Gerry, I'm always looking for your posts on this story.

Ending sounds good, can't wait to see the chemistry that happens while they're hanging together, and won't it be fun when Mayson finds out...heheheh

Thanks for the continuing fix Gerry

TEEEEJ

Great part, can't wait for more

Hi,

Great part.

Gerry

Excellent A-plot development!

Tricia

Okay... Baby Rage in a better place and Lois too

Wonder what Mayson thinks of the deal...

Good instalment.

I wonder why Lois doesn't blame Superman for her apartment getting smoke and fire damaged. After all he was supposed to be watching over her. If that's the case why wasn't he there to stop it before it barely started.

I know the ill timmed 'Superman rescues' were just added for dramatic effect, to place the gentle readers into a state of concern for Lois, but the effect seemed to be lost in the 'matter of fact' way in which the situation was finely handled.

I think a few sentences, whether aloud, or inspectively, about the delay in Superman's rescue would help here. Lois is smart and would understand that Superman couldn't abandon helping those other people, but she coudl still be a bit ticked off over what she lost when Big Blue was supposed to be doing his guardian angel thing. After all, she is still not that happy with the man in the first place.

Tank (who, like everyone else, knows that Mayson is going to find Lois at Clark's place, but like everyone else, is looking forward to the fireworks)

Lois is moving in with Clark? Do I sense a secret being uncovered soon?

Let's see, Clark has to brake up with Mayson , Lois and Clark have to declare their love for each other , Clark has to tell Lois his secret or at least make up with her as Superman and they have bad guys to catch, all in two parts?

Ingra

Once again, thank you for your positive comments. I'm so glad that you're enjoying the story. I'm definitely enjoying your feedback.

I want especially to thank Maria who so conscientiously and kindly sends feedback on both boards--above and beyond my expectations.

And to the other faithful feedback givers, (daneel, TEEEEJ, kb, Tricia and inga) thanks a lot.

I'm going to post the last two installments today. I hope it doesn't take away from your Sunday archive reading, but I'm getting bogged down with Passover preparations (a labour of love, but a labour nonetheless)..

So stay tuned for Parts 11 and 12.

gerry