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FDK-Blind Spots 9/12 #11758 03/31/04 03:08 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast daneel OP Kerth
OP daneel Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast	Nice move Lois!! "Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot

Re: FDK-Blind Spots 9/12 #11759 03/31/04 05:11 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca... Wendymr Pulitzer
Wendymr Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca...	Ooh! Lots of nice stuff in here! Love the Lois and Clark interaction; as with Raisins, you show how well they know each other and how much they act in synch with each other. Nice little niggles of jealousy around Mayson, too! I like the use of Charlie King, as well. And now there's trouble on the way... More soon! Wendy Just a fly-by! waves

Re: FDK-Blind Spots 9/12 #11760 03/31/04 07:20 AM
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Anonymous Unregistered A	Nice investigative story going, all the little L&C quirks we all love going on. My favorite piece here: Quote "What?" Clark blinked. "I didn’t say anything." "You’re smiling at me." "Sor..." He stopped himself from completing the word. He wasn’t sorry that he was staring at her. He loved watching her move, but he couldn’t tell her that. "I was just thinking." "Happy thoughts?" "How incredibly brilliant you are. I love the way you face a problem head on and come up with a solution." Good cover, Clark! Charming and sneaky all at once. Next insallment soooooon pleeeeeeeze! TEEEEJ

Re: FDK-Blind Spots 9/12 #11761 03/31/04 09:34 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great part. Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK-Blind Spots 9/12 #11762 03/31/04 04:07 PM
Joined: May 2003 Posts: 118 Brazil Ingra Hack from Nowheresville
Ingra Hack from Nowheresville Joined: May 2003 Posts: 118 Brazil	Great part . (and remember that I never liked Mayson ). I can't wait to see what happens next! Ingra Clark: What is that? Lois: It's my word. Clark: There is no such word. Lois: Sure there is. Someone's a chump, therefore, he's chumpy. Clark: Try again. Lois: Are you challenging me? Clark: You bet your sweet little chumpy I am.

Re: FDK-Blind Spots 9/12 #11763 03/31/04 04:47 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia T TriciaW Pulitzer
TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Gerry An excellent part! Tricia

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