Wow. This is an intense story. I'm very excited to see what's going to come, especially as I have no idea, never having seen The Hunger Games. I wonder if you are going to turn Clark into the saviour of the world. His anger at how the people in the districts are treated in comparison to the Capitol is quite obvious. He is currently fighting to keep from doing something radical. well, maybe he NEEDS to do something radical. It's the only way that more than one person will survive this. And I'm sure that ever reader wants at least 3 of the tributes to survive.
I feel really sad for Becky. It was awful seeing her deteriorate of the course of this chapter. I hope there is something that can be done for her, but only you know what resources are in place in the world.
More soon please.