I love this more and more each time! laugh can't wait for the next one! I think everything was explained quite nicely at the bottom-- there's more characters you *could* elaborate on, but that's all I can think of referenced in your story. (Although you did mention Daniel a couple of times and I didn't see him on the list, but idk if he's crucial to list...)

Love how Clark and Lois have caught on so quickly. Clark being so sensitive about the possibility that they are from another "world" or aliens is perfect and well done. I love Lois trying to get him past it. And omg, can't wait for the next installment! What's going to happen now that they found Belle? wink Love it!

Nothing spoils a good story like the arrival of an eye witness.
--Mark Twain