Hi Morgana,

Thanks for the FDK!

In Borrowed Time there wasn't a lot of character development on Lori. Yes, she is Lois, but in a big way she is more than Lois. There is more to her than meets the eye as you will see in this story.

As far as content, as I have been developing as an author, I think my content has improved.

This story is going to have you on the edge of your seat biting your nails, cheering at their successes, crying with heartbreak and crying tears of joy.


Expect a lot out of this story.

Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks"

My stories can be found here

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