This is a fun story. I sort of wish you had not told us where Superman was. On one level I appreciate it, but on another it lessens the intensity. Until that line, there was a chance that Clark was actually being held by Intergang.
At least Lois knows he is not with Mayson, and knows that she saw him since Mayson did. Even if she does not realize she also danced with him more recently than Mayson.
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I think you wanted to say "was".
It is also probably good that Lois has not officially called on the police. That would make things more difficult for Clark in the long run.
