Your opening paragraph
The Clark Kent of this universe had determined early on that we would use his powers for the benefit of others. As soon as he had started flying he had gone to him Mom and Dad and asked them how he could help and yet have a private life. They came up with the idea for the costume.
Has to issues. I think it should be "that he would use" and "gone to his Mom and Dad".
His earlier start to acting as Superman is an interesting change.
