This was a great ending to a great story. I loved all the journey that both of them took to reach this point. You knew how to put into words all the emotions involved in this story and it were very powerful emotions, good and bad feelings. Sometimes it seemed a happy ending was impossible, but you accomplished this mission with perfection. No wonder, after all you are a master in the art of writing.
I wish it were in the nfic folder though. I think in this case this chapter at least, should have been. It was close but not close enough. The sexual nature of this part would have been complete in that folder.
Hey, let me tell you a secret: SQD wrote this story originally as nfic. If we beg, grovel and nag enough maybe she will take pity on us and post the complete untrimmed version.
