I really like the way you had Lois reveal some of what happened to her. This was so much better than her just telling him. And given the powerful emotional nature of her experiences, it would eventually have to surface.
This line made me laugh:
Wayne, if you want to play in my league, you are going to have to think outside the box of jesters and mutant animal people.”
I wish Clark would tell Lois about what he knows about Bruce/Batman. Is he trying to protect her? Or is still a little hurt about everything that's happened?
Joan
