This is so beautiful! It matched and complemented the first part perfectly! There were parts of this story where I literally had my mouth hanging open because it was so poetic and moving!
Oh wow! Thanks so much Anti-K! I don't know about poetic though!
I love the paragraph where Lois realizes that she began to want children when she realized that she loved Clark and that their life together is now the most important thing to her. I also really enjoyed the thought that she was 'birthing' stories and the natural follow-up to that--that she and Clark had brought them into the world together.
The "birthing" stories with Clark was one of my favorite parts to write for this half of the story. Afterall, writing IS a labor of love!
A perfect ending, though, in that she doesn't give up either. It's interesting that Clark doesn't give up because he has hope and Lois doesn't because she's too stubborn to! Perfectly highlighted through this story!
Exactly! Lois is too stubborn to give up.
Thanks!
And I love the last line. It's great to know that she's still aware of the good things in her life and isn't focusing only on the bad!
Great job! I absolutely loved this story! Thanks for sharing.
Thanks so much my friend! Glad you enjoyed it!
