I'm so sorry I haven't left any feedback yet, but I am really intrigued by this story. I knew the premise was not going to lead to anything good, and I am fascinated by the way it is playing out. You're doing a great job of illustrating how Clark and Superman are not the separate entities that Clark would like to think they are. It's interesting, too, how Clark clearly sees himself as superior to Superman. I can't wait to see where this goes!
Amber
