Man, it didn't take long at all for things to start going wrong! I started getting a sinking feeling in my stomach as soon as I started reading, and it got a lot worse when Clark forgot details. I can't imagine how alien to himself he must now feel, as opposed to alien to the world.
And Superman? I really feel bad for him. No one, even split in two, can keep going all the time! And from his comment to Clark about Clark having everything, I can see trouble's already brewing.
But good for Lois in not kissing Superman! Things are going to be even more complicated for this love triangle than ever before, but I'm glad she didn't betray 'Clark.'
Great story--I'm really enjoying it!
