Thanks for all the feedback!
AntiKryptonite You've defintely got the right idea of the direction this story will take:
It's never a good thing to make deals with the devil, so to speak, and I have a feeling this won't end well for him. But it will definitely be interesting for us readers
Does Lois know at this point that Clark is 'innocent'?
That's an excellent question. It's too soon in the relationship for her to know that for a fact. I was thinking Clark's overall behavior as a gentleman might lead Lois to consider that possibility.
IolantheAlias Dum, dum, dum... the drums of foreboding are beating.
You've got that right. There will be consequences for Clark's choices.
Framework4 Been watching Star Trek? Perhaps "The Enemy Within"?
I am a Trek fan but I haven't seen that episode in years. Still- it's great inspiration!
Thanks for reading!
Joan
